monster story
i know i know i haven’t been writing my other story i forget!anyway heres another story ya might like!
A BRAND NEW ANIMAL!
Hi you might know i love bouncing on my trampoline i love just bouncing on the weird black surface with your hair whipping at your back.It was on one of those days that i saw it.I happened to see it chewing cautiously on a fly.Or that’s what it looked like.I didn’t know that flies were blue!I’ll tell you what it looked like-and you can make up your mind whether you believe me or not.Believe me i am!
It looked like a big marshmallow .It’s brilliant blue sparkly wings stretched out in front of it.It was then that i realised that it was hovering a few centimetres above ground.I was very sure it was a christmas animal because it was red and green the christmas colours.It had an odd sparkle about it .I decided to call it a mallow-wing because it had two beautiful wings, and i’m sure it was a marshmallow.It’s mouth was always open and i’m not sure if it could close it, maybe it was just surprised.It had glowing orange eyes which seemed tohave a golden flame dancing around them.It’s pupils were the same colour as a tulip *freaky!* and they were rather small,It walked towards me and banged into the leg of the trampline.I picked it up and fed it some hundreds and thousands, it only seemed to like the green and red ones.It eventually got bored with eating and wandered off.*munch*, it squeaked.I gasped as i turned around and then groaned.It had eaten mums roses!I rushed over and pulled the thorn out of it’s paw.I filled the scrunched up pet green pet bowl that i carried in my pocket with water.I guess it must have tasted good because it’s greeney lips had slurped it up in a matter of seconds.I also saw that it could close it’s mouth it was just probably surprised to see me like i said before.I started to wonder whether it thought i was new to it.At that moment my dogs Mabel and Lulu shot out of the dog flap.When the dogs saw the magnificent creature their tails wagged and they were all playing together in one haze of dazzling blue light.I couldn’t believe my eyes!They were playing together as if they had known each other all their lives!
I quickly took out the camera and *snap* it was a awesome picture.It started to fly off quickly I jogged after it, I reached it’s home.It looked like a big block of somethimg brown.I picked up a wood circle and pressed it against my eye.I nearly fainted with delight the whole wood was made of the most scrumptious lollies you can imagine i saw that the big brown block wasn’t a big brown block but a ginormous block of chocolate!Lucky for me it was right next to my home!After about five minuted i went back home with my tummy full of delicous lollies.Now would you believe such a terrific tale such as that?I tell the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth!
I wrote that! *heh heh*:)umm i’ll show you one of my favourite teachers (miss mc kee) version tomorrow my two other favourite teachers are mummy and mr jack!

THAT IS THE LONGEST POST I HAVE WRITTEN YET! *lol*
Comment by aleeya — August 20, 2008 @ 8:45 pm
mmmm I want chocolate,,,
Comment by poppy — August 25, 2008 @ 10:54 am
so do I i haven’t had it in ageeeees!!!
Comment by aleeya — August 25, 2008 @ 7:35 pm